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Description
comments welcome
Image size
399x600px 180.75 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D3
Shutter Speed
1/30 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
50 mm
Date Taken
Dec 2, 2010, 5:56:10 PM
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Comments2
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This photo has great appeal and is interesting to look at
My eye zeros in on her face and her arm takes my eye downwards and then back up again via her hair.
I do however find your logo very intrusive in this picture - maybe a grey would work better as the background is black and also smaller?
If I was being very picky I would have cloned out the bright splash of hair above her breast. I find it distracting and spoils the lovely curves in that part of the picture.
The face does not have much tonality or shape to it. It looks like you have flattened the lighting a little. I would expect the forehead to be brighter in the centre and there to be greater contrast overall. I suspect it might be your post-processing which is a matter of personal opinion.
Apart from these minor points, I think it is excellent work and a great picture
My eye zeros in on her face and her arm takes my eye downwards and then back up again via her hair.
I do however find your logo very intrusive in this picture - maybe a grey would work better as the background is black and also smaller?
If I was being very picky I would have cloned out the bright splash of hair above her breast. I find it distracting and spoils the lovely curves in that part of the picture.
The face does not have much tonality or shape to it. It looks like you have flattened the lighting a little. I would expect the forehead to be brighter in the centre and there to be greater contrast overall. I suspect it might be your post-processing which is a matter of personal opinion.
Apart from these minor points, I think it is excellent work and a great picture